Writing reflection

                            Writing reflection 

I have been learning how to use personification in my writing it is when you give a non living thing a human quality.Here is a sentence to show you. The Tiger danced by the whistling tree. I also know how to use onomatopoeia it is when you use sounds like Bang! Whiz! Pop! I will show you a sentence.Whiz! Fireworks flew up into the air some of them were wedged together Pop! Bang! Pop! Bang! Fireworks burst and bubbled into beautiful colors that surrounded the sky.

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If I was a tree

                            If I was a tree


If I was a tree I could reach out my hands, grab hold of the wind. I would use my hands and make a plait with the vines. If I sensed people coming when I was doing the conga I would freeze like a statue so they didn't notice. If there was a fireworks party I would be like a spy so nobody saw me coming. I would get up close to the stage to watch the fireworks boom and bang and spread thousands of beautiful colours across the land like a rainbow.That's what I would do if I were a tree.
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